Word pallandrome

Come angels.
Comfort and help
your love.
I
Need the help
To live.
Can Nothing
Life save?
No.
Save life,
Nothing can
Help The Need
To live
I
Love your
Help and comfort.
Angles come.

Hey, sorry it took a while for you to get a reply for this.

I love the idea behind it, one of those poems which works when
reflected, but I think you wrote the poem with this too much in
mind....the first stanza really doesn't make much sense and at first
I simply thought your english wasn't strong, only when I finished it
I saw what you were trying to do. It's a good idea and you have
a really beautiful base for a poem, it just needs some touching up, and
maybe if you changed a few of the words and the punctuation then it would
make more sense.
But, besides that, I thought the second stanza (Save life, nothing can help the need
to live) was stunning!!! (Although again, at the end it didn't make sense.)
Work on it a bit and I think it could be amazing!
Hope this helps, you can PM me if you have any questions.
xoxo
T

Hahaha, very clever, FlyerS! I don't think it quite works as poetry (it's a bit awkward and stilted, really), so it's definitely not the greatest poem out there, but I love the idea and the fact that you wee able to pull this off as well as you did is pretty fantastic. Kudos to you!

Your writing is beautiful. Seeing as how this is my first work of yours that I'm reading, I am stunned...but in a good way! I like this poem very much and find nothing wrong with it. The way you formed it, I understand why. As for the phrase "Life save? Save Life" part...at first I was lost and I thought you made a mistake, but then I saw how it fit into your whole poem as a whole. Nice work!