Hi, Skorp. Can I call you Skorp? LOL. Okay, I'm here as promised.
I don't feel like nitpicking. Well duh, there's nothing to nitpick here. I'll just have to say that I really liked it. The rhythm was great! Not a note out of tune, if I were to speak about music. =D It was simple. Cool. So yeah. Keep writing!
I hope you get in.
~ Jash ♥