Its a cool use of imagery but I didnt really understand what was happening, it lacked detail. I think you need explain your idea more in the text and imagery, like just a few more speaking pieces or something. Apart from that it seems like a good piece and would probably be a good manga. Well Done!
Is that guy Avenger?? *concentrates* This strip could need some details as said by LilySoulMahon could use more words and a little more details on the figures.... It could be a good manga but i don;t think that it could be successful if you continue doing it on MSPaint or any other of its type.... Keep up the good work... PM me for anything...
Are you living for the things you are praying for?
thanks i like the feedback. =P but yea sry bout the detail lacking. my ms paint is all i got sence adobe photoshop elements just got lost D: but yea the comic is sapposed to be about a zombie apocolips and well.. this is 1 character. if you have any ideas on different characters that would be good in here post =P
Hey dafreak, I like the plot and the whole idea, with stuff like this your name normally starts with a J, just a guess. Any how, the idea and plot are good may I suggest going to the scripts section and writing out a script? or downloading, GIMP it's a great program,,, it's as easy as MSpaint, with PS tools. Looking forward to more of your work!
