Something Orange V2.0

I think you guys liked my previous work of Something Orange http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=74234 so i drew another one.....





Hope you people like it....

Hmm, at first glance it's amazing and it is quite put together well, a black outline, with a inner line of orange! GENIUS!
I didn't like the hair at first glance, the coloring job... But after I looked at it for a while It adds texture of sorts! But I would like to suggest using a free photo editing program like Gimpi to use CP computer paint or w.e to make it look more clean, but stick with the drawing but edit the whole dropping to CG it.

I really like the design, and the colors look cool The only thing that irks me- just a little bit- is the eyebrows. They look too small and come down at too sharp of an angle, even for his mischeivious expression. And the hair might be just a bit too big, but besides that I can't find anything wrong with it ^_^ awesome job!

I really liked this, and the colouring use was a great idea as if it was me I would of most likely used red but thats a more commonly used colour with that type of art so yours is different.
Though I think i'd prefer it if the horns were depicted more in detail and design on the clothing shes wearing could be bolder and stand out more.
Apart from those point I really like this and think its certainly an area to continue with.

Somehow that candy in his hair makes me think of Lamboo from katekyo hitman reborn