She will never know - A lost love.

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She will never know.
She will never know
H.Poole

She will never know,
how you danced in the sun,
how you ran in the rain,
how you cryed in the ocean.

She will never know,
how you held her hand,
how you touched her skin,
how you whispered her name.

She will never know,
how now you are gone,
you will never love again.




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This is really nice, but please remember to put the capitals in!
"The last to be overcome is death, and the knowledge of life is the knowledge of death." - Edgar Cayce




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Oooh, this was really good. Very dramatic. I loved the raw emotion. Remember to capitalize the first letter of every sentence, not just the first letter of every stanza.

Sierra
What a shame,
We used to be such fragile broken things.



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