Natalia look's different

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I can still feel the needle in my arm. But, I'm curies about J.D.'s mother. I mean, she look like an Angel with her face so soft and she has the nicest smiled and her color eyes remind me, my father eyes, blue. I got out my house way too early. So that what people said the early bird gets the worm. I manage to get to school and saw Natalie. I wonder did she break up with Jorge? I walk fast until I saw her. I was fill with joy to see her safe and sound. I ran toward her.

"Hey Natalie... So what happen to you and Jorge? Did you break up with him?" I ask, nervous.

She looks at me like she doesn't even know me. "Do I know you?"

I was surprise. No, in shock what Natalie say. "It's me, Agnes... Don't you remember me?"

"No, I don't remember you."

She has amnesia, great. I turned my head to the other way until Natalie started to laugh. "Ha!

I'm just kidding Agnes."

I quickly look at her face, in serious. "You just save a you're secret. I almost going to tell everyone about you deep, darkest secret."

"Okay, I won't doing again and the answer is yes. I did broke up with Jorge, yesterday."

"Hey, by any chance, does Aida, Candace and Denise are coming to school?"

"I think so, you know Denise. She always late but, hey, I don't blame her."

"Me too, I don't blame her too."

"Yeah." And Natalie looks the other way.

I have curiosity, about what happen her. With the kidnap by a werewolf and she disappeared and you know the rest story.

"So, what happen to you?" I ask, nervous.

She turns on me like she understands my answer. "I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you. What did you say?" Natalie asked.

"Nothing, just forgets it."

Aida, Candace and Denise got out from the bus. They saw as and ran toward to us. Denise has a huge grin on her face. "Hi guys... Anything new?" Why I even ask. I should be here

yesterday if I wasn't so sick.

"Yes, I got a new boyfriend!" Denise jump and squeak with joys. I didn't jump. I raise one eyebrow.

"Okay, what's his name?" I asked, trying to smile.

"His name is Jake"

"Wow, I bet he's a cool boyfriend?" Why I'm asking her again. I should punch my mouth.

"He is so cool, he's the greatest boyfriend that I ever had!" Denise couldn't stop hugging herself.

My friends couldn't stop talking about Denise's boyfriend. Until I see J.D. pin on the wall. We pass him but then.

"Hey Agnes! Can I ask you something?" J.D. yells

My friends stared at me with there huge smiled. I should know that they think that J.D. and me would end up together but no. I still don't have any crush on him. Well, a little but not too much.

"What do you want, now?" I groan.

"Could you excuse the teachers that I'm in the hospital with my mom, if you don't mind?"

"Um... Sure..." I said with a stupid voice.

"Thanks and ... um..." J.D. put his hand on the back on his head. "You look beautiful, Agnes" J.D. was blushing

"Uh... Thanks." I couldn't stop blushing. I went to really red like an apple.

"Bye."

"Bye." But I didn't look at him.

J.D. went toward to his car and turns it on and left. I stared at his car until Cynthia pushes me.

"Oops. My bad. I didn't see you. Well, I did. That's for the warning. I told you to not talk my future boyfriend." Cynthia told me with a warning.

I got up and look around to check if was anyone around.

"You're not my boss. And don't try to talk my..." I gulp "My future boyfriend" I hide my embarrassed face. "Cause you're going to get it, alright. Miss ugly Cynthia" I tried to not show my good side.

But she scoffs. "He's my future boyfriend so stay away from him-" Cynthia push me and I fell down. "-FREAK" Cynthia finishes the sentence and yell.

I got up and my rage stared to building up.

"No one calls me a freak. Okay. Cause the only freak is you" I punch on her stomach and said

"Idiot".

Cynthia was lying down on the floor. I went in shock. I can't believe that I punch someone in my life. I went inside. I couldn't control myself. I rush on the bathroom. I stared at the mirror. My reflexion. "I'm became a monster." I whisper myself. Only a monster could fight to get the boy. I couldn't believe myself that I said to Cynthia about my future boyfriend. J.D. is not going to be my future boyfriend or husband in eight years. I don't want to see him. He deserves to have Cynthia. I didn't bother to come out of the bathroom of what I did to Cynthia. I know that I would get in trouble with the principal. I swallow real hard. I got out of the bathroom and look both sides. No sign of him. I walk slowly to get Spanish class until the principal caught me. Busted!

"What are you doing here in the hallway Miss. Wilson?" The principal ask.

"I... um... Just going to get my class. I arrive really late. That it's all. Mr. Principal" I told him.

"Come with me, Miss. Wilson." Said Mr. Principal and grab my arm.
I'm so busted!

He took me to his office. Busted, busted, huge busted! He opens the door and force me to sat down in the chair. He sits down on his chair. And look at me with that evil looking eyes. My mom is going to kill me.

"Agnes, why are you cutting classes? That's against the rules of this school." Principal told me.

"But, I'm was not cutting class. I was, just, only gone to the bathroom...-" I took one gulp. "-Thinking something what I have done!" I explain to him.

"Yeah, keep telling, you and you're fakes story. That what everyone say to escape in with there problem. And you know what, Agnes?"

"What?"

"I'm calling you're mother to talk about you, tomorrow!" Principal yell and pick up the phone and started to dial my mother's phone number. I breathe really heavy and stared to sweat. Mr. Principal was talking on the phone. I'm really in big trouble with my mom. I didn't really want to cut class. I felt really weird.

"Agnes. Tomorrow, I want to see you and you're mother in my office."

I keep my mouth shut.

"So, I call you're teacher to come and pick you for you're next class. Get out here."

I went out of the office and wait for my teacher. Mr. John saw me and picks me. I had to go to GYM class but it went quickly and Science too. Art class went slow. The entire student had to draw any wild animal. I stared to draw a Zebra. Denise draws a parrot. Natalia draw a lion. Aida draws a baby monkey. Candace draws a tiger. Silent dude draw a gorilla and Cynthia, by her attitude, draw a hippos buts. Mrs. Bloom got mad at Cynthia cause she wasn't suppose to draw any animals buts. Natalia stared to draw a wolf. I decide to peek. It's that the same wolf that I saw it last time. That thing took Natalia away. But how she could remember that. Finally lunch time. I sat down with all my normal friends. We are waiting for Natalia. Man, she really has a big appetite for those all food. Everyone mouth was really wide open. Natalia only took was one bite. One bite! To the first top to the bottom. Candace was right; she is really weird maybe she was only hungry. Natalia finish eating and took out her drawing notebook. I look a peek and I only could see is a drawing of Cynthia getting wet by a milk. When I look at Cynthia until she screams. That girl just throws at Cynthia the milk. But how Natalia knew that was going to happen? Hey, if there four girl and one boy. Where is Alexander?

"So, does anyone know what happen to Alexander? Cause I try to call him but he didn't answer my call."

All my friends stare at me. "He went to Disney with his family!" Everyone told me.

"Okay." I laugh, a little.

I rush to my locker, to pick my book for the next class. All the class went fast. I rush to the bus and the bus drop me at my house. My mom is waiting for me, so I went to the backyard. Ah, my old tree house. I stared to climb at my old tree house. Open the window (which I always Carry my keys to the window.) I open it and went inside it. Until someone knock my door. Busted! My mom opens it. Great! Is mother and daughter argues time.

"Agnes. We need to talk." Mom said.

"Okay, mom"

"Agnes, the principal call me and do you remember our deal we made when you were at 8th grade?

"Yes. If I don't get trouble with the principal. But don't have to fight at the principal. But that not what are you thinking it!"

"Yes and now the principal told me that you were cutting class."

"Mom! I was not cutting class, I went to the bathroom because I forgot something and got a lot on my mind!"

"What something?"

"I did bad to someone at school."

"You're friends?"

"No!"

"And who it is?"

"I forgot that person name!"

"Agnes! You're grounded for lie to me"

"What's wrong with you?"

"There is nothing wrong me. I'm just you're mother.” She turned around and walked toward the door and closes it, hard. Great, my mom now is a psycho mother.
Tear down! the walls that will surround
Cry out! above the burning sound
Show me! how bleeding hearts still pound
If we stand together,we will be unbroken!




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I love your story. May i ask if English is your first language? If it's not this is an amazing story. You have done an exelent job. Work on ways to improve your state of being words so they flow with the story. I really liked the story though. :D
to be continued.....




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Well, actually my first language is spanish cause I live in Puerto Rican. The English language is my second. Hehehehe, is actually weird that the English language is the second cause as a little girl, I learn how to speak English.
Tear down! the walls that will surround
Cry out! above the burning sound
Show me! how bleeding hearts still pound
If we stand together,we will be unbroken!



Anxiety is the dizziness of freedom.
— Søren Kierkegaard