My Soul To Take

I think I know,
And I think they're right.
I think my soul has taken flight. Working with the rhyming scheme, I think this would work better here, with the first stanza. I'd also take out that "and" to help the flow.

I think I love him,
It's been a year,
I'm wondering why I'm still in tears.

I'm starting to wonder if he was real,
I think I need to hurt to feel,
And know that I'm not crazy. I think you need another line here, looking at the rhyme scheme below, it should really rhyme with the third line, but I don't know what you'd put with crazy...Though, honestly, I think the word crazy sort of halts the flow a little. I'm not crazy (pun not intended!) about that third line. I'd replace it with a couplet, to make a four-lined stanza to match the one below.

I need to trust my loyal friends,
They won't hurt me, they'll try to mend,
But you have my soul, please give it back,
You've taken a red rose and made it black. I love the last two lines, so very much. The part about the roses...wonderful. *pulls out handkerchief and wipes eyes*