Hi! I am here like I promised! This chapter was a good one. It was the part where the boy meets the girl. One of the most important parts. I like how joshua knows her. And, the cause of battle was in this chapter. Also very important. You did a real good job. Although I am not a swearer, not all people arn't. Anyway, great job, and I hope that chapter four will be posted sooner than later! Kudos! Felix Windbow.
