Some New Photos

Hey everyone! This photos have been sitting around my DA for a while, so I decided to show it here. Please do give your comments about it, I would really appreciate your opinion. I hope you like it!

This are my first takes in Photojournalism
Larger and clearer photo: http://vitamincakes.deviantart.com/#/d32lsvw


Larger and clearer photo: http://vitamincakes.deviantart.com/#/d32q806


Larger and clearer photo: http://vitamincakes.deviantart.com/#/d339zov


And here is a sunrise, I took this at dawn, at around 5:30 AM, the crescent moon is still visible. I forgot to place a copyright, so please, no stealing.

Proof this is mine: http://vitamincakes.deviantart.com/art/ ... cakes&qo=3

hey Vitamincake!
I'll be reviewing these pictures for you.
I like them. You made them? They are very nice.
I really can't say much...
But the last one is really big. Well bye then.
~Ladypurple.

Great Pictures!
Nike

Hello, Cake!

Oh, these are really good. I especially like the last one, I've no idea why but the last one just looks really good. The first picture actually creeps me out a bit. What's with the giant picture of Jesus? It's like he's just staring at you. *shudder* But otherwise very good. Who is that person sitting in the chair? The only suggestion I have would be to take that person out, it takes away attention from the altar thing with the pictures on it. I like the picture with the two girls too. Do they know you took a picture of them?

Well, that's all.

Love, Reise.

Hey Vitamincake!
All of these pictures are amazing! I'm just going to review them in order.
1. The orange lighting effect looks cool!
2. I like the second one and how it's in black and white. It nice, simple, and really good quality.
3. The trees in this look really awesome! The way they arch and everything. The road has the perfect lighting on it. And I like how you can't see the persons face, so it's kind of mysterious! This one was my favorite, by far!
4. This picture is beautiful! You must live in an amazingly pretty place! The clouds look beautiful with the sun set in the back ground, and the shadow-like-ness of the trees look cool! I like how it goes from dark to light and back to dark again.

Over All: Amazing pictures, you are truly a great photographer! Your camera has wonderful quality and it is really pretty where you live! Good luck on your photography!

Hello!

1. I feel if the focusing is almost a little too soft, and that the lighting is too dark. I do like the orange tones though.
2. Nice tones and positioning! However yet again, I find the focusing too soft, and the photo looks a tiny bit smudged and dirty to me
3. Again, I find the focusing too soft, and the lighting too dark. Although I like the concept of the photo.
4. Beautiful! Although fiddling with the contrast etc is all it needs to make it much better

I hope I wasn't too harsh, but you do have a lot of potential and great ideas! Keep snapping ;D