The Ins and Outs of Magic

As the world raises in its methods of its survival, it plummets into its own undoing.

That is very true. Also very short.

You really need to give people more to review when you post stuff.

Ok you have a good title, good opening but where's everything else? Please most more.

Wow, that's true. But short!
Keep Writing!
Nike
PS-is it a slogan, words of meaning?

Really? Where is it? The actuall story telling I mean. Do you really plan to get anything out of a one sentence thing? Seriously, you really need to post something! Let me tell you, I clicked on The Ins and Outs of Magic anticipating to read a good fantasy story. You do have an amazing title and all, but you need the key component, the actual story. You are so not going to be getting anything out of this! Listen to me and post the story on here so people wont make the same mistake I made when I clicke on it and so they will not, at all, be disappointed at what they find! Add something to it! I am SERIOUS! Add the actual story!