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Okay, so I drew this.... umm... this morning.
I just thought I'd post it randomly because my dad thinks it's cool and he said I should...
Thanks daddy!

Yeah...um.... Enjoy =)

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It cuts off at the bottom but oh well. So awesome! I can't draw at all.
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Oh... I know it cuts out the bottom. I never drew the bottom actually...I didn't have any room on the paper =(
And I didn't feel like making everything smaller...so the tip never did get drawn xD

Thanks though :)
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Well, it's rather good, I'll give you that. It is difficult to see, however, but you could darken the lines by upping the contrast in a simple photo editor.
The hilt is far too wide, so unless your hero has fingers like bananas...well, let's just say it wouldn't work.
The entire sword is completely line without shading, and therefore it looks very 2D (flat) this is very easy to change, just use a simple pencil and draw lines on the areas opposite the light direction (alternatively, use the flat of the pencil to shade, instead of the crosshatching method I just described).
Nice work, keep drawing!
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Hello, Isha!

This is very well drawn, I really like the handle. The decorations are really pretty. Your lines are very straight and crisp, the only suggestion I have would be to darken the lines a bit and add a little shading. Though the shading is optional, I think it might ruin the picture a bit. There wasn't a point to the sword which is okay, not many people lie drawing the point anyway. I still stick to saying that you should make the lines a bit darker.

Well, I've noting else to say. Stay awesome.

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Ooh, this is awesome! I especially like the details of the sword handle (yes, I know tons of people already said that). I love how you make the sword look so three dimensional, even though it's just lying dormant. Maybe you could sort of tape another piece of paper to the bottom and draw the tip of the sword!




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Hey Isha! It's Pink :)

So I really like the detail you put into the sword. I mean, when I draw them I barely pay attention to the handle or anything. It's like a blade and a squared shaped T. Haha.
However, I do think you should have measured it completely so you would have space to draw the entire blade, all the way to the tip. (unless you intentionally wanted it that way. Either way it's fine, since it is your art)
But it's still amazing nonetheless :D
Keep it up!

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Nice drawing ishy! Sorry I didn't get around to this sooner, I kinda forgot. Oops... This is great isha! Great detail! But it/s missing the end, you know... the part that the princess puts in the prince ;). The hilt is very nice though! I really like it!
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Bahahahaaa!!
The part the princess put into the prince must have fallen off :o
Yep.
And I know the handle's technically too large...but it's an Aquarian sword (shoulda mentioned this sooner). We have mostly thin blades up there... >.>
Anywho,
Thank you all so much =D
And I might draw the tip... I like it tipless.
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Something about that just sounds...wrong. *laughs nervously*
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Hey, Ish! I didn't know that you drew. Anyway, here's my review for you. I personally like it. The design is pretty awesome. Not seeing the tip doesn't matter, well, because you yourself can picture that for yourself, and you'll probably get it right. (Unless the tip balloons up, well that's weird. :P) Okay, the only thing that I don't like about it is that it doesn't have any shadings. Maybe next time, you shade it before your post it so it'll be awesome-er than--how it is. =) I'd like to see this shaded. xD
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I really really like it. May be you can draw it 3 d, with a tilt?



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