Hate by Default

Dear sir or madam,
the reason for this letter
is to ask why you hate me.

Don’t get all protective,
it’s alright if you do.
I hate myself as well,
as do many people I’m sure.

However, you act like you do,
so I’m going to assume you do.
I am curious though
for what reason do you hate me?

Is it what I say?
Do you despise the words
I say, for lack of wit or intelligence?

Or is it the way I look?
Is it my face you hate
or perhaps my clothes or skin?

Or have I wronged you
without remembering. It happens.
There might have been a dead done
That would ignite rage against me.

Regardless, I am curious why
But need to know if you do
Indeed hate me. Because then
I must hate you by default.

Sincerely
Mr. Chaos

nicchaos wrote:

I hate myself as well,
as do many people I’m sure.

#FF0000 ">That's a bit awkward, I'm not sure how to change it but it is awkward

However, you act like you do,
so I’m going to assume you do.
#FF0000 ">It seems really odd to have do at the end of both sentances.

Or is it the way I look?
Is it my face you hate#FF0000 ">I would have put a ? here.
or perhaps my clothes or skin?


There might have been a dead#FF0000 ">(did you mean deed?) done



Sincerely
Mr. Chaos #FF0000 ">I don't like that you signed your name, I think would have been better anonymous.

Other than that, this was a pretty good poem. I loved the emotion behind it.

nicchaos wrote:Or have I wronged you
without remembering. It happens.
There might have been a dead done
That would ignite rage against me.

Regardless, I am curious why
But need to know if you do
Indeed hate me. Because then
I must hate you by default.

Sincerely
Mr. Chaos

My favorite part. The whole entire "Or have I wronged you without remembering. It happens." Although I do believe you should make it a question since you do not know why they hate you. Remember that commas are you friend! (: Just saying I really like this because it is written as if it were a letter. I think that was very creative of you. By the way, I like your username... Just sayin! Good luck and keep writing!

-Soggy