Hello everyone! I'm new here, my name is Victoria.
I was wondering when writing is there a word or anything that you over use? Foe example I noticed I use the word "okay" a lot and my stories can tend to get a bit over dramatic.
I use like, right, and seriously a lot. And whenever I am trying to write historic fiction, I inevitably use modern slang that ruins the credibility of my story. But my absolute worse habit when it comes to writing is that I do a lot of telling and not enough showing.
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.
I abuse water/skies/wings imagery. I also have a rather persistent fixation on eyes and light/dark contrasts. I ramble a lot, and gleefully abuse the comma and semi-colon. Dashes too. There might possibly be a correlation between the rambling and the punctuation abuse. Possibly. Also adjectives. And generally words that end in -y. Sentence fragments too.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.