Comment L'Amour: An Epic Romance in List Form

An idea I came up with while thinking of my next installment to my flash fiction anthology. This is very different from what I've written previously because I believe your personal interpretation of this story will be different from mine, and everyone else's who reads. Use your imagination! I had fun writing this because I got to use a lot of double or triple meaning titles or words to explain what's going on. Rated 12+ for some sexual innuendo. Anything italicized is a movie title and anything in quotes is either a line from a song, movie, book, or phrase.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy and have fun making this story your own! Thanks for reading!



When Harry Met Sally
Kettle corn from the carnival
The Notebook
Midnight rides on the ferris wheel
"Like shooting stars"
Hushed secrets
"Kiss me quick, make it last."


Movie theater popcorn
The Dark Knight
Tongue wrestling
Cherries
"Finger pies"
Ben and Jerry's
"Your body is a wonderland."


P.S. I Love You
Sensual walks on the beach
The Very Long Engagement


Half-eaten Golden Grahams
A 'random' thong
The Other Boleyn Girl
Salty waterfalls
He's Just Not That Into You
Cheetah


The Break-Up
Dried up, fall leaves
Michael Bolton's Greatest Hits
Crumpled Kleenex


The Other Man
"An apple a day keeps the doctor away."
"I don't want nobody."
"Give love a try."
Rose garden
Hesitant
Trembling kisses.


You've Got Mail
"Distance makes the heart grow fonder."
Postcards
Red-eye flights
Home Alone
"I don't wanna miss a thing."


Encounter
The Way We Were
"That's what you get."
Clean up in aisle five!
"I was naive back then!"


Warm bed
From Here to Eternity
"Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're gonna get."
Kneeling on the doorstep
"Diamonds are a girl's best friend."
YES!


Review? Like? -Jane

i dont know what's going on here. Is it a poem????
Nike

Nope, it's not a poem, it's definitely a story.

I am going to say that this was weird. It may be confusing but if you read over it you can understand it.
It was all the themes that go along with love, or that persons love life . It was the process of a normal girl's dating life.
She goes out on dates, gets dumped various times and finally she gets married. This list allows the reader to create their own stories. I do not have an suggestions, cause this is one of a kind.

This was kinda odd, but in a good way. It does seem more like a poem, but I understand what your trying to do. Or at lest I think I do. lol. It's good and different, something very hard to come by in a romance. Good job and keep writing!

Sierra

It's supposed to be pretty odd, lol.

What's with all the old romantic movies? And "diamonds are a girl's best friend"? Well, as a story... it passes.