ambrosiaa wrote:No you don't, it's amazing. Every other thought roaming in your mind is another page of agony to someone. Never stop writing, and once you have the words rush to your paper. I really liked it, though I would really advise you to use stronger vocabulary, because it gives such deep and strong anger and grief to such a topic. However, it's only my opinion, only you know what suits your work best darling.
Write on, it's your thing.