Woah, you have some talent! That's really. I had to do something like this for grade nine art, of course I only got a C...but that's because my artwork is really really bad! But yours has class!
I'll start off with what I didn't like and then end off with a positive. Okay, I'm gonna go Art teacher on you so; the swirlies at the very bottom. The random wavy lines crawling across the base. They look rather suspended and well just messy. As if the bell was about to go and you really wanted to finish it. What I would recommend for that is that you get another pen and try neatening it up, somehow. I mean, I'm no artist but that is what stuck out for me. I see you've done it with the cushion thing, though I have no worries with that as it really suits.
That's really all I feel uncomfortable with. Now for the good parts. All of it! I just loved how you used different techniques of shadings. (Ooh, I sound like my teacher.)Hatching, crosshatching, line...I can't really remember the rest...though, I know you have used it!
I loved it! I doodle all the time, but that's pretty much the extent of my artistic talents xD. I thought this was very interesting and i especially loved the lips on the bottom for some reason. The big white thing in the middle looks kind of like an upside down tree, and it's my least favorite thing. You should color it in or put stuff inside of it because it just looks so white.
The bad news is we don't have any control. The good news is we can't make any mistakes. -Chuck Palahniuk
Hiya, Marie! I agree, you do have some talent. When I first looked at this, I thought waw!
I know it's a doodle, but the swirly lines at the bottom look to messy. If you neaten it up , it will look much better. I love the randomness of this, the shades of it. What it looks like from afar, just really good! You should be quite proud!
~Tamara )xx
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
This is a very good doodle, and I'm a fan of Ink works in general. Now, a few nitpicks.
The upper lip could've have done without the scribbly lines or the bottom lip could have some scribbly lines. The inconsistency irks me for some random reason. I love the little blobs you've drawn at the top-left of the bottom picture. Very good. The bulb-thing at the top right seems a bit crude. It could definitely do with some refinement. The tree-picture: I like this except for the circles around the sun. It looks a bit odd, that's all.
Overall, great work. You have great talent. Keep drawing. ~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
I love the scratchiness of the drawing and it goes from one topic... sorta, to another. I like how you just randomly add some stairs in, as well feathers... and lips?
Great, I'd love to see more like this!
Nova. <3
Alot of the time, im on here using my PS3 & my trusty usb keyboard. Dont expect much fancy quoting blocks... I shall do what I can. ;)
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