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Sorry :/
Last edited by Button on Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:01 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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I love this Piece! It flows throughout the poem, but try to use more punctuation. (:

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hello my name is James!
I adore nature poems basically because they are really soothing for my mind and you'rs really hit the spot. hahah. anyway i really like the point of the poem and that is natural water. you should have written more i think i can see you'r power of observations.
if you have any quaries about my review
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