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Hi people, Im Shurtugal, If you've ever read Eragon youll know what that means.
Anyway I joined YMS because when I show my friends my stories theyre always like "thats good" or "youre better than me" which really annoys me. So ive come to get some real feedback...if thats allright. Also i like reading other peoples stories so thatll be fun too.

ok........ummmmmmm, so hi then....meh
Life is Good and Bad,
Strange and Sad,
It has its Moments,
Its Ups and Downs,
It makes you want to Cry,
And sometimes even Die.
But….
Have you ever stopped to Think
About how Lucky you are?
Because in the end Life is simply
A collection of our
Thoughts
-Me




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Hey Shurty! (get used to a lot of different people calling you an amalgam of nicknames :D )
Well, welcome to YWS, you've obviously come for the right reasons, so you'll be quite happy here. Post all you want, but keep a good stack of review or else the mods will come after you with death rays! :D
PM me or any other people around (try to choose those whose names are colored in light or dark green, they're the higher-ups of YWS) and you'll become quite comfortable within the week.
Once again, Welcome to YWS!
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shurtugal wrote:Hi people, Im Shurtugal, If you've ever read Eragon youll know what that means.
Anyway I joined YMS because when I show my friends my stories theyre always like "thats good" or "youre better than me" which really annoys me. So ive come to get some real feedback...if thats allright. Also i like reading other peoples stories so thatll be fun too.

ok........ummmmmmm, so hi then....meh


Hi, shurtugal. Welcome to YWS! And by the way, I love Eragon, so I definitely know what your username means. You came to YWS for the right reasons. Excactly why I joined and probably everyone else on YWS. If you need a review or help with anything just send me a P.M. About a month ago, I was a new member, just like you. Hope you enjoy YWS and have fun. Good luck with your writing~bluewaterlily. :D
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Hey there! I guess I'm one of those "higher ups" that Jen mentioned? o.o I don't feel that way!

Anyhow, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you found us. We're certainly a great place to get good reviews on your writing, so I really hope you find the site to be what you're looking for! We're also very friendly and I've found personally that being friends with other writers is an incredibly rewarding experience.

If you need help with anything on the site, have a question about something, whatever - feel free to shoot me a PM and I'll let you out! Have fun exploring!
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
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Hey, I'm SimonCowellLuver but most people call me Simon or SCL doesn't really matter to me. I like to read other's stories and give feedback. I know i am not a very good critic but i will give you my best advice. :smt069
I read part of Eragon so I sort of know what you mean. XD
Well, I can't wait to see what you write.
See you around.

SCL :smt059
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2. you just tried it
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Shurtugal!

Welcome to YWS!

I loved Eragon! No, really. And, I'm waiting for the last installment. Well, you have definitely come to the right place. It will be fun I'm sure.
So, do you have a favourite genre?
Or how about a fave authour?
Feel free to PM me for a talk or if you have questions. :)

Well, see you around!
~Lava
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- Ian McEwan in Atonement

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