Heartbreak

The pain, it doesn't hurt much.
I have it 'round the clock.
Since you've gone.
Tick, tick, tick, tick tock.

Inside, it has broken.
One piece, now two.
Gone, faded away,
While tears stream as I cry boo hoo

Split in half
Because you're gone.
Forever and a day
Can't go on.

But I know that I can try.

I think this is a worn out topic, and cliche. Also, some of the things you said sound really awkward, like

While tears stream as I cry boo hoo

'Boo hoo' makes it so that you can't take the poem seriously, like it's supposed to be lighthearted. But, I think, you probably want people to take it seriously. I think you should rewrite this poem, and put more detailed things in it, instead of these cliches like

Because you're gone.
Forever and a day
Can't go on.

Keep writing! You can only get better.

Thanks I'll work on it, because it isn't supposed to be light-hearted, you're right.

This was good whenever I try to put words together it usually winds up a mess and I have to start over. Yours is well written a little on the short side but other than that is was good keep it up maybe I will get to read more of your work later on.