Imagine

Have you ever wondered what a world with no boundaries would be like? A world with no walls, no ceilings, no floors. A world that had absolutely no restriction anywhere, where you could access anything with nothing more than a simple thought. Where the cripple would just think of walking, and they would run. Where the blind would imagine colors, and they would see a rainbow. Where the deaf would consider sounds and then immediately hear sweet music.

Imagine a world where the injured were healed, where the sick immediately became well. Imagine a world where everyone could do what they wanted without negative effects on anyone else. Imagine a world with no rules. Imagine a world with no boundaries.

Try to imagine a world of doing nothing but what you wanted to every second of the day without facing problems, adverse results. Imagine getting wrapped up in happiness, imagine spending eternity with your loved ones, imagine having the perfect day every day.

Imagine a world with no death, where everyone was happy all the time. Imagine the sun always shining for those who love it, but for those who don’t, an eternal moon. Imagine a world of noise for those who feed on it, and silence for those who prefer. Imagine a world that is everything everyone wants it to be. Imagine a perfect world.

Imagine not being restricted by your body. Imagine being able to fly and never being able to fall. Imagine being everywhere at once, but at the same time, being no where. Imagine being everything. Imagine being nothing.

Imagine feeling everything as if you were something else--feeling the fish as if you were the ocean, feeling the children’s feet as if you were the ground, feeling the birds and clouds if you were the air, feeling the wood dry up underneath you as if you were fire.

Imagine being anything you wanted to whenever you wanted to. Imagine feeling everything in the entire world, becoming different objects if you just imagined it. Imagine being the words on this page. Imagine being erased.

Imagine being a tree that is cut down. Imagine being a leaf that is trampled on. Imagine being the sun and the stars in the galaxy. Imagine being a candle that is blown out.


Have you ever imagined a world without boundaries?

I have.

Hey GoldenQuill!

This might just be me, but you have a lot of imagining, but nothing really else. Which is kind of weird! I'm trained to be an engineer, so I was kind of hoping you would propose a solution or to make things better... but you didn't! You just said that in the imagination, anything can happen. Which is rather evident because otherwise, we couldn't actually imagine what you asked us to imagine.

I don't know! Rather circular reasoning here... I would like to see a different, more powerful conclusion!

I like it.....its good

Hi Golden Quill

Hmm... not quite sure what I think of this. I agree with Snoink when she says there is a lot of imagery and not much else. Although the imagery is good It's not really giving us a story. The piece itself is well written and your very good at creating a world, in this case a perfect fantasy world. I would encourage you to write about what is happening to make a world like that. It would make better non-fiction.

verawinters

Where the blind would imagine colors, and they would see a rainbow. Where the deaf would consider sounds and then immediately hear sweet music.

I liked this imagination of yours. I can say that was creative.

Imagine a world where the injured were healed, where the sick immediately became well.

I just didn't like this thought. You could try to put it down in a better way.

Imagine a world with no boundaries

I don't know if its your different writing style or what but you already said this line before in the first paragraph. Already there's so much repetition in this piece that this line hurts to read.

Imagine a world of noise for those who feed on it, and silence for those who prefer.

I liked this one!

Imagine being everywhere at once, but at the same time, being no where.

here your imagination went too wild. Like how can we be everywhere then also nowhere? That's a stupid thought and no one can make that happen. Even your imagination.

Imagine being everything. Imagine being nothing.

I liked this one too!

Imagine being anything you wanted to, whenever you wanted to.

I liked and loved the last two words(I have). That concluded the whole piece gracefully.

As Snoink and Vera rightly said this piece was full of imagination which was good in a way but boring in another. This piece is supposed to be of Non-Fiction, so we can't create our own world. On a whole, it was okay-okay. You used the word ;'imagine'like million times

~Shubhi.

hey there!!
so this is my first time to review on a non-fiction but well here it goes. okay, imagination. that is like my favourite wordd. i could very well do just that for the entire day, imagine this, imagine that on and on. naturally since this is to do with imagination i was quite intrested. i liked how you wrote it and your usage of words were creative. but to me, the main thing is that you stuck to the topic of imagination and didn't lead on from one thing to another.

-budding writer

Hi guys.

Thank you all very much for reviewing my story! I do, however, have to comment.

The point of this piece was to imagine. To imagine a world without boundaries. I found that many of you are suggesting that I should put how to "bring about such a world". Obviously, this world has many boundaries, and it wouldn't be stable or strong without them. We MUST have boundaries in this world. There is no possible way for this imaginary world to come true. This is why we're imagining.

The point of this piece was to get you considering how the world is through everyone else's eyes. Many of my lines of "imagine this" or "imagine that" made absolutely no sense. But they weren't supposed to. For example, on that one line that said, "Imagine being everywhere, but at the same time, being nowhere"--of course that's impossible. But imagine it as if it is possible, imagine how it would feel. Perhaps you'd see yourself being air in this line? I'm not quite sure what my world was trying to tell you, only that it was trying to say something.

Anyway. I once again thank you all for the lovely comments and reviews.


Love & Blessings,
Aushy