lonely, by the door.

this is my classmate Aya. well, she's not my classmate now because she's moving to Manila.

anyway, this photo was taken by me. she's sitting by the door, i took a picture of her, and CLICK! this is it.

it's not much, but i like it. i'm not that good in photography, and i guess i had a lot to learn.

this photo is for Aya.

Hey darkangel!

Hey, I really like the lighting in some parts, like near the painting (it is a painting, right?) it looks so lovely. Like you spent ages trying to get it The only thing about the lighting that I don't like is that near Aya it's too dark and you can't really see her properly.


If you were planning this photo, I'd say move the painting as it doesn't really go with anything else. Also, I'm sure loves this photo


Are you going to consider photography, because I think you might be good at it! I know this wasn't a proper review but I'm quite a big fan of photography so I tought I might comment


Well Done!

~Tamara
xx

Hi there darkangel.
Though this isn't a literature piece, I would like to point out that your punctuation is not good. The word 'I' needs to be capitalized when used alone. And also, your title also needs a capital letter to start the title, at least. Sorry for this.

As for this picture, which should've been my main agenda, I liked it. I like the lamp's shade and the effect it's creating. Your friend is looking tired or hurt. The painting behind is also cool. I liked everything.

likes**

~Shubhi

Hi!
First off, great picture. I do agree with tam_ara that it would be a bit better without the painting in the background, as it interrupts the true silhouette effect. At first, I actually thought that it was a door, but then i figured out what it was. Anyway, what I mainly love about this photo is its simplicity. There is nothing complicated about the pose and it seems very natural, which is good. I also love the way in which this photo shows a very pensive attitude. Overall, great picture.

hey.

@tam_ara: thanks for the comment! yeah, i think Aya is a bit darker, but i'm glad you like it. ages, huh? it only take minutes to do the editing. ha ha.

@shubhiloves2write: uhm, i am too lazy to capitalize those letters. haha. sorry... but i'm glad you like it too. thanks! and btw, she's really lonely at that time.

@SammyMercury: i'm glad you like it! thanks!


P.S. wait, it's not a painting. it's a real DOOR! ha ha.

I was just about to come on here and say it was a door hehe. Anyway I really like this, it is beautiful! I think the lighting by her is a little dark, but it gives it something special. Pm me if you need anything.

-Flower-

okay thanks.