String Cheese

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Angels-Symphony
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Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:02 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:02 pm
a poem about cheese O_O Thanks for the reviews guys :P
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VivelaMusique
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:22 am
VivelaMusique says... · Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:22 am
*Huggles*

Hello, soul-sister! ;)

I'm a fellow cheese-stick addict. And lovin' it.

Other than the above mentioned, minor things I can't find anything to change. It's completely perfect! ;)

Seriously, my new favorite poem. I'll recite it when I'm hungry. Haha.

Great job! Very cute!

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kingolions
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Mon May 10, 2010 10:30 am
kingolions says... · Mon May 10, 2010 10:30 am
Hey. I loved this poem. I'm sorry, but someone has to say it. This poem was kinda cheesy! But I really like t. It was creative, and not many people would thing of something that cool.
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Glauke
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Tue May 11, 2010 9:53 pm
Glauke says... · Tue May 11, 2010 9:53 pm
good job! geez, you have a knack for making me hungry! :elephant:
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TheUnknownPoet
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Wed May 12, 2010 1:30 pm
TheUnknownPoet says... · Wed May 12, 2010 1:30 pm
cheese makes me sick, not in any form. not even string, sorry about the bees and all that.
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