stick in the lake

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This is really nice!

However, you may want to resize your image

Apart from that though, I really love the idea - it's a beautiful piece of work.

Thanks for posting this. :D Good luck, and god speed.

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Yes, please resize! Another thing I would suggest is experimenting with different kinds of lighting when you take nature pictures. So, this exact stick might not be there, but try going back to the lack at a different time, with different sunlight, and see if you can't find a better, brighter picture. This picture is dull and doesn't catch the eye easily, but if you could find some sunlight to make the log seem crisp against the water, I think it would work better! Good luck!

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Heya Black!

I have to agree with both Mo and Hannah.

The odd angle doesn't do justice to the picture. The lake looks all icky and not pleasing, so I would suggest you to reduce the amount of lake in the picture.

As for the angle: Maybe something like a low focusing of the leaf near the stick, with the lake water a blur.

Keep clicking!
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I'll have to see if I can go back on a more sunny day with a better camera because I like your suggestions, unfortunately the day I went was a particularly cloudy day and the only camera I had on be was my phone. But yes Thank you for the advice ^-^
and I agree resizing would be good, I'll have to do that next time
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