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Chapter 1

This is a story about a man, whose name is Gizen, he has a degree as a computer technologist, he leaves in miami, in a apartment complex, but he works as a mail deliverer for an investment company. until he met patel, and his whole life changed.

Gizen just finished work, it was dark and he was on his way home when he bumped into patel. gizen said; "hey, watch where you are going." patel looked at him and kept on moving. gizen walked up to him and shoved him and said; "hey, I just had a bad day, and I do not like been pushed around." patel looked at him and said; "so you want an apologie, well I guess you won't like this." a van came from the opposite side of them and stopped beside them. and two guys came out and grabbed gizen. gizen yelled; "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to." patel said; "shut his mouth, we don't want to wake up the whole neighborhood." they were now in the van, driving to a abandoned facility. when they got there, they turned off the light of the car. patel turned to gizen and said; "you said, earlier that you do not like been pushed around." gizen said; "yes I did." patel said, "we have something to show you." he nodded his head at his partners. they picked him up and followed patel.

they worked into the abandoned facility. gizen was in awe, he said; "what is this?" patel said; "mungo chi." gizen said; "mungo what?" patel said; "mungo chi, its a energy, a energy that gives unbelievable powers, powers that are not to be speaked of." gizen; "ok, that's nice but what does that have to do with me." patel smiled and said; "we've been watching you since the day you were born." gizen says; "how have you been watching..., tell me something about me." patel smiles and says; "well you are twenty-one years old, you hate peanut butter, you do not have a girlfriend, and most of all you are a punk. you want me to keep going." gizen said defensesively; "technically I have a girlfriend, we just haven't spoken, yet. and I am not a punk, I just don't like violence." both guys holding gizen laughed. patel said; "it's getting late, we will drop you off at your home. djibril take him home." a dark 7 foot man appeared from thin air. gizen said; "what just happened?" patel said; "we shall teach you all that tomorrow, kamii." gizen said; "kamii my mother calls me that, wait how do..., he appeared in his room. gizen said; "what just happened. whoa, I'm so tired, I'll just sle..., wait."

He woke up the next day, and said to himself; "wow, that was the weirdest dream I have ever had, well time to get refreshed and ready." he was now refreshed and ready, he stepped out of his apartment and unto the street. he said, to himself; "the sun sure is bright today." he pulled on his long black curly hair, took a rubber band out of his pocket and put his hair in a curltail. he proceeded to his bike, when he saw someone sitting on his bike, he yelled; "hey, what are you doing. he ran to his bike and stopped. he said; "hey, I know you." the guy turned to face him. he said; "patel, so I wasn't dreaming." patel said; "if you thought that was a dream wait to you see this." patel snapped his fingers and they both dissappeared.

they reappeared in an unworldly place, the whole place was white, and covered with a black fog. gizen said; "is this heaven, am I dead already." patel said; "no, you're not dead yet." gizen said in a frightened tone; "what, I don't want to die, I just want to live my life." Patel laughed and said; "you'll understand later, right now the elders want to see you." gizen said; "the elders." they worked into another realm entirely, the room was blue, and there were little lightning rods striking the ground. there were three things in the air floating. gizen said; "what are those things in the air." patel said; "be quiet or you shall wake the gods, he turned around to face them and said; "arc, shac, doar. the things floating in the air vanished and reappeared right in front of them. gizen moved back. one of the things said in a godly feminine voice; "don't be afraid, we are not here to harm you." she smiled and said; "we have been watching you for a long time now." gizen said; "watching me, who are you?" she said; "where are my manners, my name is alexandria." two other manly voices came up, one of the voices said; "I am peshito." the final voice said; "I am pentateuch." and they all said; "we are the forefathers of mungo chi." gizen said; "ok, you guys look kind of young to be elders or forefathers." they all laughed including patel. gizen said; "what's so funny?" alexandria said; "we are not young at all." peshito said; "we've been around for thousands of years." pentatuech said; "his right, even patel has been alive for as long as we have." gizen said; "how is that possible for you to be alive for that long." alexandria said; "mungo chi." they all bowed down. gizen said; "ok, but what does this have to do with me?" they all smiled. alexandria said; "we shall tell you, kamii."

alexandria started of by saying; "I, peshito, and pentateuch where all teenagers about to be adults, when we met kamii and baal." gizen thought to himself; "kamii, I know that name from somewhere." peshito said; "kamii and baal where best of friends the day we met them, they where always joking around, until." gizen said; "until what." pentateuch said, "until this powers came, this power they call mungo chi." gizen said; "mungo chi, what is this mungo chi?" alexandria said; "it is an himalaya energy with unlimited proportions, this energy makes us do anything we want, but, we can't let it be seen by the world, for if we do." peshito said; "we shall die." gizen said; "wow, so what happened to kamii and baal?" pentateuch said; "well, when we found the mungo chi in the Himalaya's there was only one person who could get it, the person with the purest soul, and the person with the purest soul was kamii." gizen said; "kamii, had the purest soul." alexandria said; "yes and baal hated that so much but, he hid his feelings." peshito said; "so when we left the himalayas, and went back home to cambridge, new zealand. we felt like a negative energy had followed us, but we did not know, who specifically it followed. when we got back. kamii promised us he would train his mind, body, and soul to the point, where he would be able to give some of his energy to whom he pleased. we where all ecstatic." pentateuch said; "all but one, baal looked at kamii and said to him; "so you think because you have some little pathetic power you are more superior than us, I'll show you, I'll show you all." alexandria said; "then after that, he vanished. peshito said; "we haven't seen him ever since." patel said; "last we heard, he was now the boss of the world." gizen said; "that's impossible, you can't be the boss of the world." alexandria said; "but when you have haku chi, you can." gizen says; "haku chi." peshito says; "that's the energy that comes to the people with dark hearts. the people who are at the lowest of there life." gizen says; "wow, that's a great story." patel says; "a great story, this really happened." gizen says; "ok, so why am I here?" they all looked at each other. gizen said; "what is it?" alexandria said; "we did not want to tell you this until later, but the world keeps getting worse, so." gizen says; "so what?" peshito says; "kamii lives in you and we have to do the ritual to wake him up." gizen says; "wait hold on, you are trying to tell me that the strongest of all the mungo chi users, is inside of me, you guys are lunatics, I'm living, now take me home." pentateuch says; "but we have to... alexandria says; "let him go, kamii will awaken himself, patel, take him home." patel looked at gizen, smiled and shaked his head. and they both vanished and reappeared at gizen's apartment. patel said to him; "you should have taken the ritual." he then vanished. gizen says; "whatever, I'm going to my bed, and pretend like non of this happened."




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TayoGabriel10 wrote:Chapter 1

This is a story about a man, whose name is Gizen, he has a degree as a computer technologist, he leaves in miami, in a apartment complex, but he works as a mail deliverer for an investment company. until he met patel, and his whole life changed. This doesn't need to be there. Just delete it.

Gizen just finished work, it was dark and he was on his way home when he bumped into patel. gizen said; (Comma, not semi-colon) "hey, watch where you are going." patel looked at him and kept on moving. gizen walked up to him and shoved him and said; "hey, I just had a bad day, and I do not like been pushed around." patel looked at him and said; "so you want an apologie, well I guess you won't like this." a van came from the opposite side of them and stopped beside them. and two guys came out and grabbed gizen. gizen yelled; "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to." patel said; "shut his mouth, we don't want to wake up the whole neighborhood." they were now in the van, driving to a abandoned facility. when they got there, they turned off the light of the car. patel turned to gizen and said; "you said, earlier that you do not like been pushed around." gizen said; "yes I did." patel said, "we have something to show you." he nodded his head at his partners. they picked him up and followed patel.

they worked into the abandoned facility. gizen was in awe, he said; "what is this?" patel said; "mungo chi." gizen said; "mungo what?" patel said; "mungo chi, its a energy, a energy that gives unbelievable powers, powers that are not to be speaked of." gizen; "ok, that's nice but what does that have to do with me." patel smiled and said; "we've been watching you since the day you were born." gizen says; "how have you been watching..., tell me something about me." patel smiles and says; "well you are twenty-one years old, you hate peanut butter, you do not have a girlfriend, and most of all you are a punk. you want me to keep going." gizen said defensesively; "technically I have a girlfriend, we just haven't spoken, yet. and I am not a punk, I just don't like violence." both guys holding gizen laughed. patel said; "it's getting late, we will drop you off at your home. djibril take him home." a dark 7 foot man appeared from thin air. gizen said; "what just happened?" patel said; "we shall teach you all that tomorrow, kamii." gizen said; "kamii my mother calls me that, wait how do..., he appeared in his room. gizen said; "what just happened. whoa, I'm so tired, I'll just sle...,(No comma there) wait."

He woke up the next day, and said to himself; "wow, that was the weirdest dream I have ever had, well time to get refreshed and ready." he was now refreshed and ready, he stepped out of his apartment and unto the street. he said, to himself; "the sun sure is bright today." he pulled on his long black curly hair, took a rubber band out of his pocket and put his hair in a curltail. he proceeded to his bike, when he saw someone sitting on his bike, he yelled; "hey, what are you doing. he ran to his bike and stopped. he said; "hey, I know you." the guy turned to face him. he said; "patel, so I wasn't dreaming." patel said; "if you thought that was a dream wait to you see this." patel snapped his fingers and they both dissappeared.

they reappeared in an unworldly place, the whole place was white, and covered with a black fog. gizen said; "is this heaven, am I dead already." patel said; "no, you're not dead yet." gizen said in a frightened tone; "what, I don't want to die, I just want to live my life." Patel laughed and said; "you'll understand later, right now the elders want to see you." gizen said; "the elders." they worked into another realm entirely, the room was blue, and there were little lightning rods striking the ground. there were three things in the air floating. gizen said; "what are those things in the air." patel said; "be quiet or you shall wake the gods, he turned around to face them and said; "arc, shac, doar. the things floating in the air vanished and reappeared right in front of them. gizen moved back. one of the things said in a godly feminine voice; "don't be afraid, we are not here to harm you." she smiled and said; "we have been watching you for a long time now." gizen said; "watching me, who are you?" she said; "where are my manners, my name is alexandria." two other manly voices came up, one of the voices said; "I am peshito." the final voice said; "I am pentateuch." and they all said; "we are the forefathers of mungo chi." gizen said; "ok, you guys look kind of young to be elders or forefathers." they all laughed including patel. gizen said; "what's so funny?" alexandria said; "we are not young at all." peshito said; "we've been around for thousands of years." pentatuech said; "his right, even patel has been alive for as long as we have." gizen said; "how is that possible for you to be alive for that long." alexandria said; "mungo chi." they all bowed down. gizen said; "ok, but what does this have to do with me?" they all smiled. alexandria said; "we shall tell you, kamii."

alexandria started of by saying; "I, peshito, and pentateuch where all teenagers about to be adults, when we met kamii and baal." gizen thought to himself; "kamii, I know that name from somewhere." peshito said; "kamii and baal where best of friends the day we met them, they where always joking around, until." gizen said; "until what." pentateuch said, "until this powers came, this power they call mungo chi." gizen said; "mungo chi, what is this mungo chi?" alexandria said; "it is an himalaya energy with unlimited proportions, this energy makes us do anything we want, but, we can't let it be seen by the world, for if we do." peshito said; "we shall die." gizen said; "wow, so what happened to kamii and baal?" pentateuch said; "well, when we found the mungo chi in the Himalaya's there was only one person who could get it, the person with the purest soul, and the person with the purest soul was kamii." gizen said; "kamii, had the purest soul." alexandria said; "yes and baal hated that so much but, he hid his feelings." peshito said; "so when we left the himalayas, and went back home to cambridge, new zealand. we felt like a negative energy had followed us, but we did not know, who specifically it followed. when we got back. kamii promised us he would train his mind, body, and soul to the point, where he would be able to give some of his energy to whom he pleased. we where all ecstatic." pentateuch said; "all but one, baal looked at kamii and said to him; "so you think because you have some little pathetic power you are more superior than us, I'll show you, I'll show you all." alexandria said; "then after that, he vanished. peshito said; "we haven't seen him ever since." patel said; "last we heard, he was now the boss of the world." gizen said; "that's impossible, you can't be the boss of the world." alexandria said; "but when you have haku chi, you can." gizen says; "haku chi." peshito says; "that's the energy that comes to the people with dark hearts. the people who are at the lowest of there life." gizen says; "wow, that's a great story." patel says; "a great story, this really happened." gizen says; "ok, so why am I here?" they all looked at each other. gizen said; "what is it?" alexandria said; "we did not want to tell you this until later, but the world keeps getting worse, so." gizen says; "so what?" peshito says; "kamii lives in you and we have to do the ritual to wake him up." gizen says; "wait hold on, you are trying to tell me that the strongest of all the mungo chi users, is inside of me, you guys are lunatics, I'm living, now take me home." pentateuch says; "but we have to... alexandria says; "let him go, kamii will awaken himself, patel, take him home." patel looked at gizen, smiled and shaked his head. and they both vanished and reappeared at gizen's apartment. patel said to him; "you should have taken the ritual." he then vanished. gizen says; "whatever, I'm going to my bed, and pretend like non of this happened."
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