The Lakehouse

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Slow and melodic. POV/Sung by a guy.
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I wanna go to the lakehouse,
And take a swim in the coral reefs.
I wanna swim with the fishies.
Will you come and stay with me?

We could said to the island,
In the middle of the lake.
We could fall asleep together.
Your soft hand is mine to take.

I wanna go to the jungle,
And climb up in a giant tree.
I wanna swim with the monkies.
Will you come and stay with me?

Or we could sail to the ocean,
And hopefully spot a whale.
We could jump and swim with dolphins.
I’d even let you take the sail.

But if you want to see the lakehouse,
And take a swim in the reefs.
If you want a new adventure,
Will you come and stay with me?

-Guitar and Strings-

I want to be with you forever,
And hopefully you do too.
I could sit and stare for hours,
At the beauty of the moon.

And if you sat beside me,
Maybe we could both agree,
That we still need the lakehouse.
Won’t you come and stay with me?

-Guitar and Strings-
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It would be a lovely song if it were real. :3 Good for a child, maybe. I listened to a slow song on my Itunes as I read this and it added to the effect. Great rhyming by the way! Keep up the good work!
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