I played a game that ended

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once open a time in unreal world workaday,
a boy born with wreak smile on face that day.
the time changed his position with unstoppable way

childhood came and discrimination began in swift
age of love came and lust of knowledge both fight

then the time came boy become restless, heartless and ill
unreal world made him cry and cry in endless will

he started a game of life and death with them
all died but boy never got his will
he just murmured all years till death

i played a game, which never ended
My lust for knowledge can do whatever it wants.

Love is life and life is writing.




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I love your writing! It has lots of creativity and individuality and I really love how you express your self in it. Keep on writing! :D :) 8) :lol: :P :!: :mrgreen: :smt001 :smt002 :smt003 :smt004 :smt005 :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:
Be yourself
And no one else
dance to the beat
and loose control
Never forget who you are
Be an unforgettable shining star*




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Yeah, like callmeLily73 said, very unique. Good writing, something...honest?...about it. I don't know. Either way, it was well-written. :)
Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another. ~Lemony Snicket



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