Let It Go

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Let It Go
Sometimes in life when you can't fix what you've done,you've just gotta let it go.
I easily forgive others but never can seem to be able to forgive myself.
But I can't wallow in the past.
Just because I did it then doesn't mean I have to do it now.
Still the guilt can take over me sometimes but then I have to remind myself all I can do is le it go.
Giving in is easy,fighting for what you believe in is the hard part.




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Hello and welcome to YoungWriters Society :),
It looks liek you are still getting use to the site so let me help ya out a little bit. To post a piece of your own work please review two other pieces of work so that others have a chance to have their work reviewed as well. This review will be short because I didn't really see much wrong, but i do'nt think this should be in the lyrics section it's way too short. So may I suggest posting it in the poems section. Theres a forum just for lyrical poetry.

If you have any questions, need anything to review, or just want to talk please feel free to PM me.

Have a great day,
Tiffany
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Really nice piece of writing.. If you extened this peice and made it a bit more flowing by adding comma's in some place, it would improve it immensely. These lyrics are good roots for a full song.
Having the ability to inspire and revoke feeling in someone through the power of speach and thought. That is truly an art and that is why good Authors and writers are so unique and hard to find.

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Power is in the words :)




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I really love this its very beautiful.
L!llY Masacre!



the heart is the best part
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