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Poseidon's Daughter · 2009-07-13T20:56:36Z

Edward and Bella Chapter 1 It was my first day of high school, and my cuts were hurting again. Today was going to be nightmarish. The reason I had cuts in the first place, is because of my father. He is the worst father anyone could ask for. He gets drunk every night, and then sometimes he gets out his knife or whip. (The whip more often the not.) Then he would start whipping me. It was so painful! You’d think I would have told someone by now, but I was a wimp and I didn’t want to make my dad anymore angry with me than he already was. To make matters worse, my dad was going to kill me if I caught him doing anything like he was doing. And when I say ‘kill me’, I mean it literally. He always told me not to disturb him. But that’s kind of hard when you live in the same house as him. We had just moved to Forks, Washington, the rainiest place on the planet! I would be starting school at the high school there. Maybe, I might get some friends, unlike the other school down in Phoenix, Arizona. Where my mother…died. Well, now I live in Forks, and I hate it. I’ve always hated the rain, now I have to live in it! I didn’t mind the High School, though. Well, I thought to myself, better get to sleep. I woke up in the morning, with my cuts stinging. Time for school, I thought. This was going to hurt. I took my usual shower and got dressed. My outfit was a dark blue T-shirt, the usual jeans, and black sneakers. Breakfast was a strawberry Pop-tart, and a glass of milk. Luckily my dad was still sleeping off the alcohol from last night, so he wasn’t yelling at me for once. I didn’t have to pay for the car that I have, and gas wasn’t a problem. My car was a midnight blue Lancer Evolution X, with flames on the sides of it. I absolutely loved my car. I drove to high school at my usual speed of 50 MPH or more, depends on my mood. When I got there, there was a ton of old, rusty cars. I had thought that my car would fit in nicely, obviously not! The only car that was really nice was a silver Volvo. It was really shiny, just like mine. Oh well! I thought, doesn’t matter anyway. Then I stepped out of my car and started for the office. Edited- rated R for violence- Stella Thomas.

baron.vrinda

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Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:07 am

baron.vrinda says... · Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:07 am

i felt that the title of the story didn't fit in. and i really can't make out much from the story. it seems a little lost from its track...

but maybe if you expand it, it will become better.

however, i liked it!

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Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:34 pm

HidddenDarkness says... · Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:34 pm

It was ok.
It did really fit with the whole Twilight thing.

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