Everything seems like the best thing you've ever written when you're writing it. The important thing is to not feel bad when you realize it might not be, and learn how you can be better. Don't worry about not putting it in the right section. It's just that with this being an essay rather than a fictional story, we can't give you a proper critique if we think it's meant to be fiction.
Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"
it IS meant to be fiction... It was a creative writing task, I typed it up, thought I liked it,and since it was a story, decided to post it. I'm getting real confuzzled now.
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"Storybooks and roleplays are just for fun!" To which I say: of course! But why only "just"? Sometimes fun is found in the full-send. Sometimes fun is found in taking it seriously, and aiming to do it with excellence! — soundofmind