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My name's Laura and I'm 13 years old!

I currently writing a story. It's not very long at the minute as I've only done just under 1,000 words. I've started many stories, but have never ever finished one. I now have a goal to finish this one I'm writing.

Can't wait to start browsing the forums!


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Hello Laura! Welcome to YWS! :elephant:
Can't wait to see some of your stories! If you have any questions just ask. :D
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Hey, welcome to YWS! I've never been able to finish a novel either - sad, I know - so it looks like we already have something in common! :) Maybe you try a NaNoWrMo in November! That's what I'm going to do!

Don't be shy about posting around the forums. Oh, and if you're going to post one of your stories, please remember that we have a 2:1 ratio on YWS. Basically, you have to review two stories for every one you put up. It's not hard, though, and there's a lot of great writing around the site to read and critique!

Pm me if you have any questions!
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Hi Laura! I'm Aqua, welcome to YWS. *waves*


It's great you're already writing a story, what genre is it?
If you want to get it kickstarted the best thing to do is post the first few chapters, you'll get some great reviews. If you want the best then PM an instuctor (their names are purple) and they'll do a really thorough review for you.

Ok, some rules:
1) the 2:1 ratio, 2 reviews for every sumbission of your work. Keeps it all moving nicely:).
2) dnt spk lyk dis OR LIKE THIS. It's a writers forum and we try to keep it that way.
3) rate your work, if it has swear words then best to go pg-13. If it's got sexual content or the f word then rate it R.

Those are the important ones, but check out the rules to be on the safe side.
Anyway, down to you.

What's your favourite genre to read/write?
If you went to a desert island what three things would you take with you? and what would you eat and drink for the rest of your life?
what animal would you say you were?
Who is your favourite author ? and why?

If you need any help or you want to talk feel free to PM me.

Look forward to seeing you around!

Aqua X
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-Spock.


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Wow! You're all so welcoming here! More than other forums.
My story's fantasy/adventure.

What's your favourite genre to read/write? fantasy and real life sort of think.
If you went to a desert island what three things would you take with you? and what would you eat and drink for the rest of your life? 3 things... A notepad and pen, Bed, Teddy Bear
what animal would you say you were? Ooh that's hard.. Erm maybe a Snail... because they're slow.. and I'm slow.. I don't get jokes easily :lol:
Who is your favourite author ? and why? Jodi Picoult.. because she asks some questions, that are really difficult to answer.
:) Laura x




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Hiyas, Laura! It's wonderful to meet you. ^-^

So, I bet you may be wondering about all the colorful names on the site. I'll just fill you in on that a little. :wink: I hope you don't mind. :)

Black - These are regular members, like you and me.
Blue - Greeters! Their job is to greet new members and welcome them warmly to YWS. We want everyone to have a great time from the beginning of their arrival. ^-^
Purple - Instructors! Probably the best reviewers on the site, instructors critique stories and poems. They help everyone find their weaknesses and strengths, while giving them a way to fix their style. All in all, the instructors are extremely helpful and nice.
Light Green - Junior moderators! They are assigned to watch over a specific forum and make sure that everything is running smoothly.
Dark Green - Moderators! These are the people that watch over the entire site, helping solve any problems that might occur and making sure that YWS is like a fine-tuned machine.
Orange - Distinguished Members! They are the retired moderators and just all around awesome.
Red - Administration! There are three administrators: Nate, Firestarter, and Meshugenah. All three are extremely amazing and keep the site running greatly. :)

Fantasy is a wonderful genre. I tend to write about magical worlds and such, myself. :wink: There's just something I love about magic.

Do you have a favorite part to writing or do you just love the process as a whole? And I'm guessing you write stories mostly? Or do you write poems?

Good luck with your novel and keep heading towards the finish line. ^-^ Just remember every word gets you closer to the end, so don't give up. :wink: You'll do great.

PM me if you need anything! :)

Smiles!
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Hi Laura and welcome to YWS! I know the feeling about never finishing a story. I started so many when I was younger but I just let them die up. I think that's why I switched to poetry, because it's shorter so I can actually finish the first draft. :P

Anyway, hopefully you can finish yours. As a little encouragement, please accept this gift. Charlie?

WELL HELLO THERE LAURA! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERE'S YOUR GIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant: :thud: :smt001 :smt002 :smt003 :smt004 :smt005 :smt006 :smt007 :smt008 :smt016 :smt020 :smt023 :smt026 :smt027 :smt028 :smt031 :smt032 :smt038 :smt040 :smt041 :smt046 :smt050 :smt059 :smt064 :smt080 :smt109 :smt110 :smt115 :smt116 :smt117 :pirate1: :ftw:
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Laura...

I can show you a site
Shining, shimmering, splendid.
Tell me, newbie, now when did
You last let your mind run free?

I can open your eyes
Take you forum by forum
Over, sideways, and under
on a magic greeting ride.

A whole new site!
A new fantastic way to review.
No one to tell you "no" (except the mods)
Or where to go,
or say you're only dreaming.

A whole new site,
A dazzling place you never knew.
But when you're way up here,
There's nothing to fear
Because now you're in this whole new site
With us!

Unbelievable greeters,
Indescribable instructors.
Posting, reading, free-writing
On an amazing, awesome site.

A whole new site!
(Don't you dare close your eyes)
A hundred thousand things to do.
(Hold your breath, it gets better!)

It's like a shooting star,
You've come too far.
You can't go back to where you used to write.

A whole new site!
(every turn's a surprise)
With new chat-rooms to pursue!

We'll greet you anywhere,
There's no time to spare.
Let us share this whole new site with you!

A whole new site.
It's where you'll be.

A thrilling space,

A wondrous place,

For you and me!

xD Hope I didn't scare you with that song :P

I'm Shina, one of the instructor-greeters here on YWS. So it's my job and my pleasure to be strange greet the newbs. Welcome to YWS :elephant: Join in the grand reopening fun, okay? :D

Have a great day!

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.



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