Love is pain

EDIT: I've added the melody to this. I don't know anything about chords or guitars but I can make a melody on the piano. The letters in parenthesis is the melody. Each syllable gets a new note. Middle C position, capital letters mean below middle C, lower case letters are middle C or above. PM me if you have any questions or have a suggestion as to how I can write this clearer.
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Blood, blood (c c)
Rushing, rushing (rep.) (d e d e)
Slip, fall, break, hurt (g e f d)
Scream, pain, love hurts (e c d b)
Coursing, pulsing (g e f d)
Freely, flowing (e c e f)
Blood, blood (g g)
Rushing, rushing (e f e f)
Blood, blood (g g)
Rushing, rushing (e f e f)
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I bleed, you bleed (g e f d)
We bleed (e c)
Profusely (c d B)
When the blood dries (g e f d)
Are you alive? (e c d B)
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-Guitar-
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(Faster)
Everybody bleeds (f g f e d)
Everybody cries (f g f e d)
Everybody dreams (f g f e f#)
And everybody dies (e f g f e d)
Don’t tell me it’s too hard (d f g f e d)
Cause I know that a lie (d f g f e d)
For me (d e)
(Echo)You’re driving me crazy (f f g f e d)
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You don’t know me (f f f g)
You don’t see, the tears I cry (f e f f g a g)
They’re red (e e)
They’re sad (f f)
They are mine (g f a)
(Echo)You don’t know anything (f f g f e f) (last f, fall e d)
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I used to wish (a g f g)
I used to dream (a g f c)
But then you came and (f c a g f)
Ruined me (c b# a)
You promised that (a g f g)
We could be friends (a g f c)
It’s not that hard (a g f g)
Be a man (a f c) (last c is an octave above middle c)
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Everybody bleeds (f g f e d)
Everybody cries (f g f e d)
Everybody dreams (f g f e f#)
And everybody dies (e f g f e d)
Don’t tell me it’s too hard (d f g f e d)
Cause I know that a lie (d f g f e d)
For me (d e)
(Echo)You’re driving me crazy (f f g f e d)
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-Guitar-
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(Slower)
He died, we died (g e f d)
My heart died (e c e)
When you die (e f g)
I’ll be sad (a g e)
When you die (e f g)
I’ll feel gone (a g d)
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Blood, blood (c c)
Rushing, rushing (rep.) (d e d e)
Slip, fall, break, hurt (g e f d)
Scream, pain, love hurts (e c d b)
Coursing, pulsing (g e f d)
Freely, flowing (e c e f)
Blood, blood (g g)
Rushing, rushing (e f e f)
Blood, blood (g g)
Rushing, rushing (e f e f)
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Don’t die (g e)
Stay here (f d)
I love you (e c d)
More each day (e f g)
You say (a g)
It’s too hard (f e f)
But that’s a lie (d e f e)
To me (c g)
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-Guitar-
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(Faster)
Everybody bleeds (f g f e d)
Everybody cries (f g f e d)
Everybody dreams (f g f e f#)
And everybody dies (e f g f e d)
Don’t tell me it’s too hard (d f g f e d)
Cause I know that a lie (d f g f e d)
For me (d e)
(Echo)You’re driving me crazy (f f g f e d)
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Everybody bleeds (f g f e d)
Everybody cries (f g f e d)
Everybody dreams (f g f e f#)
And everybody dies (e f g f e d)
Don’t tell me it’s too hard (d f g f e d)
Cause I know that a lie (d f g f e d)
For me (d e)
You’re driving me crazy (f f g f e d)

Everybody bleeds
Everybody cries
Everybody dreams
And everybody dies
Don’t tell me it’s too hard
Cause I know that a lie
For me ...............



I really like this part. Keep up the good work.

these are very good and moving lyrics, the only verse i didn't like was the first verse, it was just a little sketchy to me, other then that the song is very good

these are very good and moving lyrics, the only verse i didn't like was the first verse, it was just a little sketchy to me, other then that the song is very good

I like this song a lot. Though I am only reading lyrics, I can feel the rhythm and the flow of it. As always when anyone writes that there is a guitar part but does not elaborate, I am curious to know what chords you are using, because it gives a better idea of the feel of the entire song. My one recommendation would be to simply put the tablature at the end, where it can be ignored by those who don't care or don't understand, but appreciated by those to whom it will make a difference. If you can find the time to send me a message, I would be very interested to know what the accompaniment for this involves. I got the feeling from the lyrics that it may have a minor theme, but there are any number of ways you could have done it.

P.S. Although this has nothing to do with your actual post, I have to mention that I love your signature. Marvelous Light is a wonderful song, and I myself am also proud to be a Christian. I love talking to people who share my passion for God and music.

Edited. Notes have been added.

-Carly