Quite lovely. I see you're new to YWS! Welcome! :]
Of course here we'll always accept your writing and photography, but there are a few guidelines. I don't mean to be picky, but as a general rule one should always have two reviews for every one post. That is to say, two critiques of someone else's work for every piece of writing (or photography) you post. :]
Now that that's out of the way - that's a pretty nifty picture! :] I could definitely imagine that being what a bug would see. Keep on taking pictures and writing!
--James
In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed by that which it was nourished by. (Exerpt from Shakespearean Sonnet Number 73)
So the picture was interesting. It reminds me of the minisodes Minuscule (anyone knows them?).
Anyways, I liked it. The only thing I noticed was that the background seemed a little too distant for a bugs eye. I dunno. Just my oppinion.
Thats all and keep it up!
When you want something, the whole universe conspires to make it happen.
-- Ralph Waldo Emerson.
ThisIsAUserName is right; you should have two reviews to every submission you make.
This is a decent picture. There isn't much of a focal point here, which isn't totally bad, because the lines in this photo lead us to a vanishing point. It's a bit unbalanced, because the tree on the right has a lot more leaves than the one on the left; if you moved over a bit to catch more on the left side, it would be a bit more balanced.
The red car in the driveway distracts, too. I know there's nothing you can do about that but, it's a little pull away from what we're supposed to be looking at.
Nice work, Llama.
June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
Great job Llama. I though the picture was great for a beginner... opposed to Juniper, I have a few comments. Since you were aiming for a bugs eyes view the picture didn't really need balance. I mean would a bug make sure the tree's were aligned and there were no red cars there lol? I thought it made the photo more realistic. Keep up the good work.
~Dakota
What is important is to know fear and yet take a step forward. Rosette Christopher
