An exerpt from A Different Kind of Goblin

*shrugs*

Comments please?

That's really good - it flows well and has some captivating imagery.

The only bad thing I'll comment on... is that I can't see how this fits in with the three chapters you posted up earlier (at least, not very well). But I imagine you already have have that sorted out so it's not much of a problem .

There's a couple of spelling errors in there, but none are too bad. I'm going to be lazy and lave the spell checking up to those who are better at it .

That's partly because I skipped some chapters. Didn't really feel like posting them. I wasn't even going to post this part until I read it at a library event and got some great response, so I wanted other people to read it.

Anyway, the purpose of this is as a parallel story to the main plot.

Well... you should post up the rest .

I read it but it sorta felt like it was missing something...you really should post the rest!

Well, I'll consider it if more people say I should.