This is really short. Forgive me if I misunderstand this. This is about life isn't it? Fantastic wordplay by the way. It reminds me of the way Shakespeare misplaced all the figures of speech to fit his works. Anyway, this is lovely.
Oh and welcome on here.
All that I'm after is a life full of laughter, as long as I'm laughing with you.
@KnightlyAngel09: Hey! I know it's a bit difficult so thanks for taking some time for this poem. Yes it is about life in general, although another way of looking at the poem has a very specific story. I hope you enjoyed the little trick I put at the end there (hehe). Thanks for the review and the welcome!
I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
