The fairytale

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A voice carries with the wind,
A soul dances in the rain,
A girl hurts on the outside
To rid the inside pain.

Three short words spoken
By two fragile lovers,
Becomes a tragic tale,
With more promises broken.

A tear falls and crashes,
A whisper is heard, secrets released aloud,
We’re all in an empty room,
Trying to lose ourselves within a crowd.

As a girl writes her devastating verses,
Her heart becomes shattered.
Her tears fall on the fairytale,
A story about how love once mattered.




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Aww that is absolutely Beautiful great detail imagery metaphor everything it's amazing and plus i actually understand it ..................................................................... very good job write more so that ohter ppl can enjoy 2 yay im first 2 coment ur really good u have a lot of talent very very very very very very very very very good poem love it at first i thought it was gonna boring but it turned out great good job



You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh