Put this together to, well, kill time because I'm sort of out of inspiration. Anyway, if my big project were a book, this is what it would look like.
Last edited by lilymoore on Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
Hey, please can you be sure to rate your works in future? I've given this an R for language. Thanks.
As for a review, it looks good but you should maybe re-think the colour of your writing. As good as it looks in places, it's hard to read in others because the white blobs get in the way and it's a strain on the eye. Then again, maybe it would be better to remove some of the 'stars' instead? The cover's just a little too busy and it would lessen your legibility issue.
My only other comment is that I'm not sure about the cresent moon on the front. You've used the same one for the back and it looks good there so maybe something different for the front like a black hole or nebula? That might look pretty cool. Especially if you played around with shades of indigo on the black hole or colours for the nebula, it would give it a focal point.
1. Rate your work. This contains some words...so rate it R.
2. Change the color font. With the white stars, the text is hard to read.
3. Moon is kind of too repetitive.
4. Some of the stars are too big, try make a few smaller.
That's all. Good job, how did you make this? It looks hard.
"We would accomplish many more things if we didn't think of them as impossible." Vince Lombardi
~You've just been ticketed by the Grammar Police! 1000 word essay fine.
I did most of it with some pictures I found through a photoshopping program that I found online along with some stock photos online and paint program. what actually took time was blending the multiple images.
And yeah, it probably needs some work. I maybe only spent, like, two hours on it. Also, I thanked Kitty for catching the rating error. I forget sometimes because I can be too liberal with my words. *slaps mouth for being so dirty* Any one have any soap? And I realize now just how hard it is to read the font. It was easier for me cause I had it magnified like, double time. I didn't even consider everyone else. Bad lily.
Anyway, thanks.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
And I realize now just how hard it is to read the font. It was easier for me cause I had it magnified like, double time. I didn't even consider everyone else. Bad lily.
