The Path of Life
By: ME
The path of life
It's sometimes easy
But usually hard
But everyone follows it
One way or another
Wether they like it or not
Life is fun, full of happiness
But here's the thing;
We die.
Layla wrote:
The path of life
Its sometimes easy,
Usually hard.
Layla wrote:But everyone follows it,
One way or another,
Whether they like it or not.
Layla wrote:Life is fun, full of happiness,
But here"s the thing;
We Die.
Overall:
) so I wont be too harsh. This is really nothing special, but also nothing bad. It's simple, without complicating, straight in the middle, kind of cute, kind of sad, but sweet. You need to put the punctuation always. The captions are also important, don't listen what you hear about not putting the punctuation or proper caps. "It's poetic" they say, but poet is a servant of words(irony it's that we shape the words and use them), that all became from the statement that we are the greatest specie on this planet, but the nature is much stronger than us. Don't forget that.
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