Is this any good?

Warning: This plot has incest, so if you don't like. don't read

I just want to know if this sounds any good.

After a couple of years, a brother starts feeling more than brotherly feeling towards his sister and decide to pays her a visit.

Hmm? Incest stories are really common but if you tweak it and make it your own, I don't see why it wouldn't be readable. Sure, the subject is a little ick but if it's good and original, I'll read it.

Ta,

~Angel

I plan to tweak it a bit Like making them....different.

i would read it and probably love it so write it

Is that the romance story you posted with the twins? Because I found myself thinking that they seemed a bit too close. If so, you've done a good job portraying it.

Haruno Sakura wrote:Is that the romance story you posted with the twins? Because I found myself thinking that they seemed a bit too close. If so, you've done a good job portraying it.

yeah.

Squishy wrote:i would read it and probably love it so write it

it's ready posted. It's called Forbidden Love and it's in the romantic fiction.