come to me

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Come to me and devour me
Swallow me up and drown
Fill your light with mine
and let us be together as one
ignited till eternity

Bind to me
Like I am your savior
Follow me because I am your lead
Obey me because I know

Trust me, because I'm all yours

Bite me like you own me
Claim me like I am the one

Drag me into the light
and hold onto me
because i will let go

Be my king and I your queen
Lord your dominance over me
Be a beast and roar

I sit by watching us fall
into a deeper, blacker abysmal hole

Come to me and devour me
Rip and break me
until I'm no longer whole

Come and watch my breaking soul.



eek.... i know its extremely choppy but yeahh please tell me how i can make it better because I have no idea how to fix poems- im a mega-amateur!

Thanks in advance
सारा मेरा ज़िंदगी मैं माल असबाब छिपा हुआ



A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language.
— W.H. Auden