The Fallen angel: The rebirth

This last poem Is unfortunately the last,

because the last is the beginning of the best thing in the world,

My fallen angel is about to become a series and a new chapter is

gaurenteed as is the rising of the sun,

Which is the book after the fallen angel.

But if the sun does not rise neither shall the black loomy sadness that has been so suddenley swept

my fallen angels heart soul and mind. to be continued......hopefully

I did not really understand this poem

In the first line you say "this last poem is unfortunately the last"
when i read it i was thinking, yes you just told us that a second ago. So it was not a great way to open your poem. Maybe, next time you should think about an idea you are trying to get across and write about that, instead of putting together lines that sound cool but don't really have anything to do with each other.

But keep writing!