i think the titles fine. i really liked it but you could make it just a little bit longer. i hope you do continue with this story, i actually quite injoyed it. conitnue with it.
I liked this story so far, but it was really confusing to me in the beginning. I mean you started talking about a chihuahua and then skipped to a whole different subject.
Overall: *it was funny
*creative
*could've been a bit longer..
Nice job. I hope to read more of your work.
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