Sweet October

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I love the month October.
I love how it feels, smells, and the atmosphere.
You just got to love it.
It is nice and cool.

The weather changing from summer to fall.
The leaves changing on the tree.
I love the different colors.
It is always so pretty.

When the leaves start to fall I love collecting them.
The way they look all wrinkly and soft and delicate.
I place it in a scrapbook of different colored leaves.
All my friend love looking at them.

Then when Halloween comes around,
Well a lot happens.
I like picking out my costume that I get to pretend to be.
I get to be who I would like to be for a day.

I like having the candy.
I always have a lot by the time I am all finished.
My parents check it for any open candy.
I don’t care I at least get to eat the candy.

Then a month later it is time for a dentist appointment.
They always give me one after I eat all that candy.
The results of each appointment isn’t well
I have a lot of cavities.

That is the whole point of Halloween.
I love the month October.
A lot goes on in that month.
This is why this month is so sweet.
3 facts: 1.You can't lick your elbow
2. you just tried it
3. I caught you cause i saw you




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Where it says, "All my friend love looking at them"
it should say friends.

I like having the candy.

I always have a lot by the time I am all finished.

My parents check it for any open candy.

I don’t care I at least get to eat the candy.


I think this sounds a bit awkward... maybe you could rearrange the words, or add some.

That's about all that I really saw.
I liked your poem. It was very good.


When the leaves start to fall I love collecting them.

The way they look all wrinkly and soft and delicate.

I place it in a scrapbook of different colored leaves.


That was my favorite part!!
I like the choice of words when you describe what the leaves look like.
Do you really collect the leaves?
It sounds like fun... I may try doing that...
Anyways. I liked it a lot. I thought it was very good.
:D

-Ashley
"I fall asleep in hospital parking lots." -Hello Seattle, Owl City




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Ashlee got everything. I did notice that there wasn't a rhyme scheme but free verse is better anyway. My favorite stanza was

The weather changing from summer to fall.
The leaves changing on the tree.
I love the different colors.
It is always so pretty.


Anyway, it was good. :)

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