Kylee and The Mermaid Kingdom

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Let me know what you think about the overlook. If people like it, then I will start writing the book. Thanks!

Kylee and The Mermaid Kindom

Overlook:
Kylee is a beautiful, popular, super fast swimmer that everyone loves and looks up to. But when Kylee’s world is turned upside down with strange things that happen in the water, people start to think twice about their role model. Even worse, they think she’s cheating at swim meets. Then, Kylee is pulled under the water and face to face with a real mermaid! When Kylee enters the world of her long lost sister, she finds that not only her real world, but also her mermaid kingdom are in danger. She must find the prophecy that was destined to be her fate, and make it come true before time runs out and she is stuck between both universes!




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I think you should go ahead and start posting it!
Sounds pretty good to me.
I cannot wait!

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Hmmm...I'm not sure this was exactly the place to post this - but I'm no mod, so it's not my place.

However, about the post itself - it definitely sounds intriguing! Go ahead and post the first bit and we'll see how it goes. It's difficult to critique what's not there, and you never know until you try! It sounds like a fun story, at any rate. I'm looking forward to it! :)

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