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Hmm.... This was funny and kinda gorss at the same time but,if I was a reading teacher I whould probley give that a b.

To make this pome a little bit more exsided u should make it a ryming pome.
Always have a Happy Life!

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Great play of words, could be spaced though (just my opinion), I couldn't read very clearly...Overall it was good...

Great desciption too!

Death



I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights