Running Through the Rain

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[pre]Some are fond of sunshine;
Well...So am i
But i like the rain, too,
Falling from the sky
For when merry April
Trips o'er hill and plain
Isn't it delightful.
Running through the rain... [/pre]




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I was very confused reading that poem

maybe you could've gave more deails

I mean what are you saying are you saying


you like being free when you run through the rain

or that you're different from others i was just very confusesd

i could hardly make anythign out of your poem

except for the suggestions I gave above

maybe you redo this and put some of my tips in

why do you like the rain while everybody prefers sunshine

is it because you don't fit in you feel like your free

from all the troubles in the world wha please

give us more details oh and you're welcome



I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees.
— Pablo Neruda