Possession

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LucidDreamerLost
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:42 pm
LucidDreamerLost says... · Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:42 pm
the ending was my favorite part, "this is love." ouch.
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LunaBuna43
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:23 pm
LunaBuna43 says... · Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:23 pm
Wow Over...

This is amazing!

Other than the few things the others pointed out it looks really great!

Keep it up!
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casey_kent
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Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:26 am
casey_kent says... · Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:26 am
I liked this poem. Though it's a little scary.I dont want to to happen to me.

Anyway, keep writing!

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