To be honest I like this character but I think her dress is so plain and not as accented as the staff and face of the girl. I would reccomend adding a belt and some creasing in the dress to add detail. Well, happy drawing!
I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities. — Dr. Seuss