To be honest I like this character but I think her dress is so plain and not as accented as the staff and face of the girl. I would reccomend adding a belt and some creasing in the dress to add detail. Well, happy drawing!
The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth. — Kate Chopin, The Awakening