He sat on the window sill,
He closed his eyes and cried.
He had never felt so alone before,
Until yesterday when his sister died.
It happened so suddenly,
No one thought her life would end that way,
She had only been sixteen-years-old,
And she'd already seen the last of her days.
He had remembered his last words to her,
They haunted him continuously,
He had said something to here so cruel and cold,
He hadn't really been that friendly.
"You make me wish you were dead, Cara,"
He growled before she walked out the door.
He had wished and wanted his sister to die,
And that Cara, he'd see no more.
And all alone in his room,
He remembered all the good she'd been.
And even though they had argues so much,
She'd actually been his best friend.
Seventeen-years-old and his little sister gone,
Why had that driver been so careless?
Couldn't they have gone down a different street,
Instead of leaving her brother here in lonliness?
Then it came to him and it hit him hard.
He shouldn't have been mean from the start,
Anger was never the answer--but she's still gone,
Even though he decided to change his heart.
So make sure you love no matter the person,
You will never know when the day will come,
When you were the one so cruel and cold,
Then you soon find out that that person is gone.
. Yeah the subject is a little overused, but I like how you dealt with it. Anyway, I found the rhyming kind distracting. I think it might be better without it.
