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Hi everyone! My name is Carmen. I love to write, but I don't finish most of what I try to write. Grrrrr, procrastination. I also like reading, drawing (although I'm not very good at it), Irish dancing, sunsets, bike riding, and lots of other stuff! :D I came here because i want some serious critiques. My friends and family always tell me that my stuff is great, but I know I have a lot to improve on and I need some people who are better writers to help me.




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Well, you've come to a wonderful place to get the critiques you want! ^_^ We're gentle, but can be brutal. :wink: Welcome to YWS! I'm Sydney; if you have any questions, feel free to PM me or anyone else on the site. We'd be more than happy to help you. =)

You sound like me when it comes to writing. I have problems with starting something and then I just... leave it. Bad habit. =( lol We'll be more than happy to help you improve and [s]shred[/s] read your work. ^_^ Nice to meet you!

Best wishes.

~*Syd*~
Formerly known as Silly Sydstix... as well as Aquarius Angel.




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Hello! Welcome!

My friend used to [and still does] tell me I was great and then I found this site and am a lot better than I was before =]

What do you like to write?
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It's so great to see such friendly people here! :) I like to write any kind of poetry and short stories, but yeah like I said, I don't finish much stuff.



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