The Key.doc
On the night before Halloween, there is always a big [s]haunted[/s] bash at the Haunted Forest where fourteen-year-old, Jessie, worked.
That Night, Jessie went into the forest with her friends Alexa and Cherish, who [s]they[/s] worked there also, even though they were all afraid of the dark.
When they came back out, all the workers were gone except for the cast and clean-up crew.
She thought it was very weird since she’d seen every key for the doors of campsite.
Panting heavily, they explained how they had heard weird noises similar to that of a wild banshee.
[s]She [/s] Jessie told them that they were imagining it.
Each time one of them stepped on a branch or twig, they jumped with a start.
Even though they knew every trail, every path, this night, this one night, they were more scared than ever.
Nobody ever went in there because six years ago, a six-year-old girl, named Clarissa, was murdered [s]in there[/s] within that exact cabin.
As soon as they came in proximity of the cabin, the screams were as loud as they could possibly get.
When they ran back, Jessie was standing, [s]jaw-dropped[/s] mouth hanging open.
They stood next to her and within ten seconds, [s]they were jaw-dropped, [/s] their jaws dropped too.
The door looked just like the key Jessie had found; only it [s]has[/s] had a strange scent wafting out from it.
It smelled like a combination of burnt bacon, rotting meat, and old cheese.
Bewildered beyond belief, they jumped in.
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